Some of my book reviews
Way back when I published my first books and the market wasn't as saturated with books as today, readers were quicker to voice their opinion in the form of positive, and sometimes negative reviews.
Read some of the reviews that were posted on the first and second editions of the Ancestor's Secrets Series.
Because I kept changing my mind about the titles and expanded the third (present) edition, I had to split the story into a trilogy and the reviews are no longer available on publishing sites.
Read some of the reviews that were posted on the first and second editions of the Ancestor's Secrets Series.
Because I kept changing my mind about the titles and expanded the third (present) edition, I had to split the story into a trilogy and the reviews are no longer available on publishing sites.
Reviews of The Ancestors' Secrets Trilogy
Blog tour kick off blog
I loved the characters. Ilona and Bela friendship was so sweet and at times I felt bad for Ilona for her feelings were far deeper than Bela’s. Ilona keep them hide well though. Zoltan was perfect a True Hun like Ilona but are they destined to be mates? What is Elza hiding? Can Ema heal from the past? I recommend this book to all. A lot of the medical references were right on. Erika has just knocked it out of the park with this book.
The story line was fascinating and so unique. I found myself glued to the pages devouring every last word and when finished I was like I need book 2 ASAP. Erika writes with vivid description I loved how she started all the chapters with plants and their symbolism. I loved reading about the Hun tribe and culture. I am intrigued to learn more about Ilona and her abilities and I would love to know why all the secrecy behind them. If you are looking for a book full of mystery and suspense with a small paranormal twist well then look no more Erika Szabo has written the perfect series for that. She will leave you begging for book 2 Secrets Revealed in the Ilona The Hun Trilogy
Confession of the paranormal blog
Birthright!!!! Where do I begin to count the ways!!! Wow I found this book to be astounding!!! By far the most vividly interesting paranormal romance book I've ever read. It is about a "girl” named Ilona; who by “Hun” culture standard is not yet a woman until the age of 29. She does not quite understand her true destiny until then. Birthright Bestowed is well written in such unique manner, you cannot help be captivated to the end. I must say it’s nothing like I've read before. I could feel and visualize what was gaping as if I was right there. I love Ilona and Bela friendship. Mmmmm. So if you’re looking for a book that has bit of everything from love, fantasy, special powers etc. This is totally for you. In fact if I were you I would get my copy now!!!!! A definite must read!!
Amazon reviews
5 stars Engaging and enchanting story!, April 9, 2013
By Amanda Danser - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
The best kinds of stories are ones that play in your mind as you're reading along. With Birthright Bestowed, Erika has certainly accomplished a feast-for-the-senses story! Erika's descriptive writing is both simple and complete. Be it describing how a character looks, how a dream feels, or how yummy lunch looks, this story played inside my head beautifully. Experiencing Ilona's journey as she turns twenty-nine and begins to find out what her destiny and purpose in life is was a treat. Intelligent, caring, self-strong and clumsy, Ilona is a perfectly written central character. Each time she escapes into her "time capsule" to think you are treated to a very busy mind at work. The integration of the main characters' Hun heritage added both historical and mysterious treats. With the inclusion of time travel, unclear rites of passage, and a menacing stranger, Erika wrote a story that I couldn't consume quick enough. The dynamics between the characters are wonderfully written. Reading along, you feel the instant connection Ilona and Zoltan have for each other, the loving yet quirky bond between Ilona and Bela, and the strong familial ties that Ilona, Elza, Ema, and Rua have formed. There is plenty of mystery, secrets, history, love and even silly (chipmunk) moments to round out this story into a superbly written tale. Unfolding in a natural rhythm, Birthright Bestowed is an exciting and wondrous novel. Kudos to Erika for a well-rounded and creatively written story. I know I'm more than ready for Book 2! Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
5 stars Suspense, Mystery & Love, March 25, 2013
By Msdelgado - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Where do I begin? There is so much to tell. Excitement, mystery, suspense, danger and most of all love. Not just love between a man and a woman but love between family and friends as well.
Ilona has just turned 29 and has discovered a secret ability about herself. Scared and feeling alone, she doesn't know who to turn to for answers. The only people she can turn to, her parents, are no longer around. Her adopted family is strictly forbidden to tell. Feeling alone and scared she attempts to piece the secrets from her past and the secrets from her present together. As she takes us on this journey, she meets the man of her dreams and the dark man of her worst nightmares. I cheered her on as she slowly connects the dots leading up to her frantic decision to hide one of the most precious secrets of her life. I was left wanting more and quickly read the 2nd book in the series, Secrets Revealed. Waiting for my book 3 fix. Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
5 stars Mysteries of the True Hun, March 24, 2013
By Sarah - Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?)
This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
I absolutely love this story. It's full of mystery, suspense, danger and let's not forget the handsome stranger who falls in love (at 1st sight) with Ilona (the amazingly smart and very lovable heroine). I loved the Hungarian touch written into the beginning of each chapter followed with the English translation. Though, I would love to actually hear the Hungarian version. I think it would sound so amazingly intriguing.
This story took me on a wonderful journey through the past, present and future. When Ilona turns 29, becoming an adult by Hun standards she finds she has an extraordinary gift. She is left frustrated & determined as she tries to figure out what this gift really is and what she can do with it. I found myself feeling her frustrations and rooting for her when she finally puts the puzzle pieces together.
We are left hanging at the end of the story not knowing the full outcome of one of the hardest decisions she has had to make. Queue up book 2, Secrets Revealed. Starting it next.
5 stars Coming of Age as a healer, March 22, 2013
By A. E. Drury "Ed Drury" (Portland, OR, United States) - (REAL NAME) Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?) This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
This wonderful book really piqued my interest in Hun culture and language. Told in a fascinating way through journal entries by the characters we learn of a centuries old traditions which are closed to outsiders and filled with magical lore. One of the aspects of this book I really enjoyed was Ilona's entries which reference the medicinal and religious aspects of various plants and flowers. Each chapter, as I remember it, contains these intriguing short glimpses into traditional medicine and beliefs.
It is, at its core, a romance novel. But it is also a thriller with dark undercurrents of mysterious and dangerous forces at work. As a first book in a series, it sets the stage for an epic saga about complex characters, relationships, and secret traditions. I enjoyed this one greatly and am anxious to read more about Ilona, her gifts, and her family.
4 stars Like NO other supernatural story! MUCH BETTER, March 18, 2013
By Carrie Fort "Indy Book Fairy" (Arizona) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
What a great read!
The story was fabulous, I sat down and was easily wrapped into the story. I was so impressed by the Hun Tribe and Ilona!
It wasn't too fast or too slow it was... Just..... Perfect!
It was inline any other story I have ever read.
I look forward to reading more from this series and this author!!
I was given book by author for an honest review LoP
5 stars Simply Amazing!!!!!!, March 18, 2013
By Lesikar - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
What can I say, I loved this book and the story, it was amazing. I stepped into the world of Ilona and she took me on a journey. Ilona is a great woman who is coming of age at 29 ( nice to see older females in a book). Ilona has a good career and friends, but she lacks in self-confidence when it comes to herself. You will meet some considerable people in this world, and it was very refreshing and exciting. This book is like sitting down to watch your favorite TV show...and you just can't wait to see what happens next. Now I must go and see if book 2 is available I can't wait. We all need a little Fantasy at times, and this is the book for that.
5 stars A different kind of romance, March 1, 2013
By Joseph - Amazon Verified Purchase
This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Ilona is a unique heroine, and is part of the line of Huns that still exists in the present day, though they keep their rituals a secret. I found Ilona to be tough, smart, and entertaining. Szabo manages to create the complete woman. This isn't your grandmother's romance. Due to the death of her parents, Ilona doesn't receive the typical instruction as to the purpose and use of her powers--mainly the ability to heal--and she is left to piece together her abilities and her tribes past using nursery rhymes taught to her by her mother. Very clever and well written tale.
5 stars Legends for Today, February 9, 2013
By Michel A. Du Mont - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Paperback)
The great story line takes Hun legends heard years ago and brings them to life in today's world. Birthright Bestowed is a creative blend of love, fantasy, history and simple 'life happens'. Erika incorporated the meanings of flowers in a manner that adds unexpected richness. Her characters resemble people one actually knows. The events could happen to anyone. Her treatment draws the reader to look for more.
The author gifted me this book, Birthright Bestowed and I am glad she did. It is well worth reading.
5 stars Loved it!, February 9, 2013
By Hayls - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Oh how I totally loved reading this book and cannot wait to read the next ones.
I found it so easy to read and easy to follow, hence making it easy to finish rather quickly in one of those middle of the night 'must finish' sessions.
I was captivated by the main character Ilona, and the way the book was written had me right there with her throughout her journey in this first novel.
To me there was all the right amounts of suspence, surprise, romance and interesting facts that I can't wait to find more about.
I would recommend this to anyone to read, but be prepared to 'want more'
4 stars Unlike Anything I Have Read Before...., February 7, 2013
By Gladys Quintal (Australia) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Oh so cruel to end it there!!!!!! I totally loved this story, it was unlike anything I have ever read before and I am totally hooked. I need to find out more about the True Hun's and their abilities. Who will Ilona choose and what is Elza hiding??
I guess I am just going to have to start with book 2....
Erika, you have a new fan:)
5 stars Wonderful read for History buffs, February 6, 2013
By Virginia - Amazon Verified Purchase This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
I purchased the Kindle edition yesterday - read cover to cover like an addict - couldn't get enough of Ilona, Bea, Elza and the rest of Erika's cast of amazing characters. Being a retired history teacher, I found the author's voice pulling right along beside her as Ilona discovers not only her own past but her own heritage.A young female doctor with an amazing ability to shift time and heal... what a delightful thought. Not wanting to spoil anyone else's journey let’s just say you can't go wrong venturing into the mind of a HUN in our modern day society.
3 stars A new voice in urban fantasy, January 28, 2013
By Philologus - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
The true Huns make a grand entry into the world of urban fantasy with this book. The revelation of the main character's birthright is well done and one very, very special feature are the musical pictures. Lovely. The execution of the story calls in my opinion - as with many new & indie authors - for a good editor. There are repetitions, inconsistencies and typos/grammatical errors which seriously detract from the unpolished beauty.
5 stars Magical, Intriguing and Unique!, December 22, 2012
By MG WELLS - BIRTHRIGHT BESTOWED by Erika M. Szabo is so original, there is nothing I can compare it to, and I'm happy about it. Discovering an unusual, original story is always a thrill.
Ancient, Magical Healing Rituals and family traditions bind this story.
Personally, I had no prior knowledge of THE HUNS, yet resonated with them as spiritually evolved earthly beings, who pass down healing knowledge and magical traditions that benefit humankind.
The plot and story is extensive and intricate. Ultimately, I resonated with the tale, the characters and their destiny to heal the ills and sorrows of humanity. I was enthralled with the complexity and attention to detail.
BIRTHRIGHT is a realistic, dramatic, intense, mystical tale which emphasizes spiritual/physical healing as well as forging humanity to evolve to a higher level at all costs. I look forward to the next book in the series.
5 stars A True Hun? A True Honey of a story!, December 21, 2012
By Cynthia J. Smith - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Paperback)
To begin, I love the way Erika starts each of her chapters! Using the meaning of plants as the theme of the section is enlightening and novel.
This is the first book in a series about Huns. It is written as a memoir but by various people involved in the action. It is written partly in "Hun dialect" which makes it that much richer!
Ilona is the main character. She has "come of age (29)" according to Hun tradition and is suddenly made aware of special "gifts" she has.
I love the idea that family members are actually physically kept from telling secrets. I am sure we all heard, "I'll explain when you get older". Unfortunately for Ilona, her parents died before they got the chance to explain.
The story flows smoothly with the introduction of many new "gifts" and a twist of fate. Everything is done with attention to detail, even historical notes!
My favorite part was the description of Ema's paintings! What a wonderful idea!
Well done! Bring on the rest!
5 stars A grand beginning for an epic heroine, October 18, 2012
By polemarch "lokhos" (USA) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Ilona the Hun is a woman's woman and a man's woman to boot. The author has created an unforgettable character who sees the world in a singular way. Written with style and and grace, Erika Szabo has stepped into the novel wars with a powerful entry. Read it and enjoy Ilona's sensuality as she adventures where lesser women fear to tread.
5 stars Not your everyday romance, October 18, 2012
By Valerie Byron (Los Angeles, California) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
You may have heard of Atilla the Hun, but Ilona the Hun is an entirely different breed. Unlike most modern romances, this one is quite unique and definitely imaginative. The author writes with English as a second language, which is charming and stylized. Her heroine, Ilona,is a woman with hidden secrets and magical powers which are vividly described.
I found this book to be chock full of interesting historical and medical information - and if you love time travel,you'll be well satisfied.
It's a great read and a bargain at the price. Cannot wait for the next in the series.
Goodreads reviews
Connie Kline rated it 5 of 5 stars
I recently read this book not knowing what to expect. Can I say WOW!!! This was an easy read, very well written, and kept me glued to the characters. I can't wait to read book two and follow these amazing characters. Highly recommended!!
MissyDevoursDelishReads rated it 5 of 5 stars
Shelves: amazeballsbookcovers, favorites, flutterworthy, paranormal, youngadult
Amazeballs writing...but stuck in another ending book saga! Ahhhhhh keep sucking me in. LOL Awesome storyline~ I'm anticipating more in depth reading in continuation. 5 Star Rating ~Great Editing & Love love love book cover too!
Missdevora rated it 4 of 5 stars Recommends it for: Mystery, paranormal, romance readers.
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review from the Goodreads group Lovers of Paranormal, R2R Program.
I like how the author starts each of her chapters, using the meaning of plants and flowers and a definition as the theme of the section, it is very unique.
The cover is also very beautiful and describes Ilona's features perfectly, especially her eyes.
Some parts of the book are written in the Hun language, which gives a special touch to the legends and rhymes.
The concept of the Huns, in this book, has nothing to do with the battles of Attila or history, although he and other well-known people are mentioned in the right moment, surrounded by folklore.
The Huns have special abilities or gifts: foreseeing the future, time traveling, healing with a touch, creating dreams or create art that suggests music. The Huns are also full of mystery and they reach more knowledge when they reach certain ages, and cannot be told from others until the time is right.
Illona is a 29 year old doctor, who can heal her patients with the modern medicine and her secret gift, but is better to be kept away from the kitchen or electronic devices. She also is in love with her best friend and starting to fall in love with the mysterious hun that just moved in town.
While she tries to solve the mysteries about being a True Hun and reevaluates herself as a woman, who is quite insecure, she is being attacked several times.
The universe created in this book is original, mystical and unique; in fact it's so original I have nothing to compare it with.
I look forward to the second book as this one left me with a huge cliffhanger and hunger to know more about the fabulous world that Erika created!
Becky rated it 3.5 of 5 stars
I received this book as an ebook from the goodreads group lovers of paranormal in exchange for my honest review.
The premise of the story is very engaging. Ilona is a true hun, but doesnt know much about what that means, other than a lot of rules and rituals to be followed. She should learn on her 29th birthday,but her parents are not there to tell her of her birthright, because they died in a car crash when she was young. So she must figure it out on her own.
Along the way, she meets Zoltan, the sexy new hun in town, and is immediately drawn to him.
Oh, and random people keep trying to kill her for no apparent reason.
I grew to like the flower language used in the beginnings of chapters. I didnt like switching points of view; it seemed to me that, in this case, it gave away some plot that hadnt happened yet.
What really bothered me about the book was that it didnt seem to have been edited. And not just normal ebook errors. There were homonym errors and structural sentence errors! Somebody needs to have a talk with that editor.
But, overall, mostly very enjoyable. Fresh idea. I will be reading the sequel
Mar 18, 2013 Lesikar rated it 5 of 5 stars
Shelves: march-2013, fantasy
What can I say, I loved this book and the story, it was amazing. I stepped into the world of Ilona and she took me on a journey. Ilona is a great woman who is coming of age at 29 ( nice to see older females in a book). Ilona has a good career and friends, but she lacks in self-confidence when it comes to herself. You will meet some considerable people in this world, and it was very refreshing and exciting. This book is like sitting down to watch your favorite TV show...and you just can't wait to see what happens next. Now I must go and see if book 2 is available I can't wait. We all need a little Fantasy at times, and this is the book for that.
Shelves: firstreads
I received this book as a firstread so I would like to say a big thank you to the author.
I really love the concept of this book. It’s a different than any other super natural books I’ve read, which is a wonderful change. Sometimes you don’t realize how similar they start sounding until you read something completely different.
Though I gave this book 5 stars I almost gave it 4 stars for two reasons:
First - I found that some points in the story were repeated too many times. For example – I don’t need to be told repeatedly that when Rua was younger he was hurt by falling off a horse.
Second – While I don’t mind stories were I can figure out what is going to happen, or the answer to the “mystery” the main character is trying to figure it out before they do, I do not like being spoon feed the answers only to have the character take another chapter or two to figure it out. It makes things a little drawn out and I find it slightly frustrating.
Those two things said I really loved this book. I’m not a huge romance fan but this was so much fun to read. It does read a bit like a YA book but I kind of like that, there is something to be said for sweet and innocent romance. I also love the references to the flowers in the beginning of each chapter and the stories of Hun folklore.
This book was an all-around fun, creative, and enjoyable read!
Note - This book is a bit of a cliff hanger so be prepared that you will want to read the second book. Normally I don't like books dropping off like this but for some reason with this book I didn't mind.
Margaret (Literary Chanteuse 4 stars
In the commencement of this book you are thrown into the unique world of this character and what an intricate mind boggling world it is. Once again Ilona is caught between trying to become the person she is meant to be without the much needed guidance of her parents and understanding and embracing who she truly is. There is an amazing amount of discoveries in store for Ilona in this segment as well as finding true love. The author once again mixes a blend of magic, history and folklore with a bit of time travel thrown in for good measure. I would highly recommend for those readers who have not read the first in this series to do so prior to reading this one as it gives a complete back round to not only many of the characters but the importance of the tribal and mystical concepts that are vital throughout the story.
Margaret 4 stars
Very well written in a memoir style that brings a little ancient history and folklore to a unique story. While reading I was conjuring up images in my mind and the main character has a real quality about her that has me wondering if she is real or not. There's even some unexpected thrilling moments. I look forward to what I will discover about her in the next book.
Kate Watts 4 stars
I received a signed copy of this book as one of the goodreads giveaways, so many thanks to Erika Szabo and Goodreads for this. I really enjoyed reading it, but it ended far too soon for me. The book is well written and easy to read and de-stress too, so I found it perfect to snuggle under a blanket and lose myself in the story.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self-discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the ‘heroine’ is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don’t know).
Danielle Kazemi 5 stars
Erika Szabo has managed to create a captivating story which centers around Ilona, descendant of the True Hun tribe. She had been kept in the dark about her birthright and the possibilities of being a Hun. She comes to unimaginable powers, healing with a touch is but one of them. Ilona's journey of discovering and learning to use her gifts while her life is in danger is exciting, also dealing with the emotions and problems of being a single woman who is torn between two men. One, Bela, has been her friend and love since they were kids while the other one, Zoltan, appears to have been pulled straight from her dreams. This book also shows how matchmaking can prove to be troublesome. Now she has to deal with her feelings for them as well as learning to use her new powers while fighting unseen evil force to save the future of the Huns. I highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a little magic with their romance
Tony Passarelli 5 stars
Birthright Ilona the Hun Book One is a fantasy romance that reads like a good mystery novel. Steeped in Hungarian legend and natural healing, Ilona is a character with a secret heritage and on the cusp of understanding her true potential. A new attractive Hun comes into Ilona's life, but he is not alone, there is also the strange dark man who seems intent upon delivering evil. With time manipulation, dream weaving and extraordinary healing powers, this is an urban fantasy story that will keep the reader turning the pages. Erika M. Szabo's debut novel is fresh, original and engrossing.
Editorial review
I want to give you my overall impression of your work: You have a terrific writing style. You have obviously done a significant amount planning and preparation in crafting your work. Your prose is nicely written with details that capture the reader. Right from the start your plot was very engaging. You do a nice job of slowly making your way through the story with details and a certain voice that allows your reader to really interact with the characters (who are all round and very nicely developed). The greatest value in fiction, it seems to me, lies in what we can learn about our own lives when we take time to analyze someone else’s — even if that someone else is just a character in a story. Characterization is one of the most important elements of any successful story. I always love it when I leave a story feeling like I know the characters. This is true for your prose. So many authors rush through their stories without really developing them. Not you. Your book read like a movie in my mind. You have crafted a quality piece of writing.
Reviewed by Olivera Baumgartner-Jackson for Reader Views (12/11)
Ilona is about to turn 29, an age which holds a great deal of meaning in the Hun society. There have been many hints about her destiny being revealed at that age, and her true calling coming to a full potential, but in the absence of her mother, who has passed away a while ago, Ilona lacks somebody to guide her. Sure, there is Elza, the devoted housekeeper, who sometimes reveals a small snippet of the True Hun stories, but Ilona does not understand too well what she is about to encounter. Who exactly are the True Huns? What is the meaning of rather puzzling behavior strangers have exhibited towards Ilona since an early age? Why has her mark changed color? Having more of her healing powers bestowed upon her, Ilona is struggling to understand what exactly they are and how they work. To make her life even more complicated, she is suddenly torn between two gorgeous men. Bela has been her constant companion and best friend since childhood and Ilona has always wanted them to be more than just friends. Then there is Zoltan, who has entered her life recently, and to whom she feels immensely drawn, yet she is also somewhat terrified of what she glimpsed in him. Is either of those two her true love? Can she find the happiness she so desperately seeks? Erika M. Szabo’s story introduced me to a whole new world of True Huns, fascinating beings who originated from what we nowadays call Hungary. The stories of my early days, those about Turul bird and Magyars and Huns, as well as some of the customs my grandparents insisted on, most notably always serving refreshments to anybody visiting, brought back many happy childhood memories. But Ms. Szabo took them much further and spun out a magical story of a special race, the Huns, gifted with many extraordinary abilities, yet living among the other, ordinary humans. I’ve greatly enjoyed the glimpses into the past, as well as many of the fantasy elements of the story, and I was truly curious about the love triangle between Ilona and the two hunks courting her. For all of those aforementioned reasons I would love to see the continuation of this mesmerizing story.
By Ivis H Davis 4 stars
“I'm a guy. Which, I suppose, by definition makes me an emotional moron, but I find the main character so in touch with her feelings that it almost scares me. It's like I can feel the intensity of the emotion to the point that it hurts. Maybe that's what it means to be a Hun?”
Julia Walker 4 stars
“Eternal love triangle, ancient tribal secrets and special healing powers, a great combination!
Ilona has always known she is a True Hun, and Elza her housekeeper ensures that traditional rituals such as Morning Prayer are followed religiously; As Ilona's twenty-ninth birthday approaches, suppressed racial memories stir in her mind and although she already has the power to read others' thoughts, new miraculous powers are beginning to grow within her. At this book's heart is a love story, and a most unusual heroine. Ilona has the power to heal with her hands alone, she also holds the fate of her people, the True Huns in her hands. Just as she must decide between the two men, she must decide whether to use her powers for good or evil, and the choice isn't so simple as it appears. I'm fascinated by ancient history, civilizations and the idea societies have secret spiritual rituals at their heart - the author weaves the Hun culture through her story in an enjoyable and informative way, whilst introducing a very modern heroine, the beautiful Ilona.”
JFaye 4 stars
This novel has mystery, suspense, romance and well developed characters that hold reading interests from its beginning to end. The element of the "Huns", a mysterious ancient people with a real historical significance (e.g. Atilla the Hun)and the fact that Ilona the Hun is central to the story, adds even more intrigue. The significance of flowers in the use of language and meaningful purpose was inspiring as well. In short, it is an intriguing work of fiction with all of the right elements to keep it interesting.
Cat RNOBS 4 stars
It was very easy to get absorbed in the characters. One can picture the development of the relationships in these stories. This engages the reader and encourages you to easily continue in the reading of the story. I can picture the story being made into cinema. The art work on the covers are beautiful, an incredible gift, created by her daughter. You will want to pick up the next book. The saga continues. Welcome to the world of the Huns. Enjoy the journey.
Valerie Byron 5 stars
Completely new and different
"I was dreaming. In the dream I was about four or five with pigtails, wearing a ruffled white dress. We were in a grocery store; I was happily hopping and singing, holding onto my mother's hand, delighted to be with her as always. She smiled at me. Her hand was warm and silky, and her lustrous dark reddish hair flowed to her mid-back. She had the deepest blue eyes, framed by long lashes. Her eyes promised love and security. I admired her and wanted to be with her all the time. To my childish disappointment, she was busy for the biggest part of every day. When she could spend the whole day with me, I enjoyed every moment of our time together. I was chattering away, happy she was paying attention to me, only to me. I was telling her a silly story I'd made up, when I saw an old woman fall in the middle of the aisle. I tore my hand from my mother's grasp and ran over to the woman. She was wincing in pain, lying on the floor. I felt my mother behind me. "Momma, she is broken. I want to fix her!" I looked up, hoping for her approval. "All right, sweet pea, you know what to do. Gather the wish in your core and concentrate on it. There you go. You're doing fine. Now, put your hands on her. Don't be afraid, go ahead!" I heard my mother's velvety voice, and I felt her hand on my shoulder. As I touched the woman's hip, I felt warmth emanating from my fingers. A serene, satisfied feeling washed over me." And so starts Ilona's story. If you have read all the prior reviews, you will know something about the plot for this unusual book. If you have only read about "Huns" in your history books, this will give you some insight into their history and people. Ilona is a magnificent woman - a doctor - who has powers of healing that are beyond comprehension. As she learns to deal with her new and somewhat frightening abilities, she also has to juggle two love affairs. This is so different from the usual fare churned out by "ordinary" writers that I highly recommend everyone to take a look at something new and completely different. Ilona, her family and friends are bewitching.....the time travel aspects are breathtaking....and you will learn something useful along the way. An excellent read!
Amy @ read to my heart content 3 stars
"The story of Ilona the Hun: Birthright was so so for me. It wasn't terrible but it just didn't hold my fascination like some plots can. As far as historical facts and information regarding the Hun history and beliefs, this was an exceptional book to read. Just for that purpose, however, wasn't enough for me.
It is about a woman named Ilona who turns 29; according to Hun tradition this is one of the three stages of being a true adult. With the coming of this birthday, Ilona begans receiving different powers and abilities that she has no idea how to use. She also meets someone who she believes may be her "soulmate" because she dreamed of him. And to top things off, she has this strange evil man trying to kill her in unusual ways. The chapters are arranged beautifully with the Hun writing at the beginning, as well as the different flowers and their meanings. This was of interest to me and I found it enlightening to understand the different meanings for different flowers.
I couldn't really get into the way it was written. It was in journal form but there was just too much inner dialogue from Ilona for me. I guess I wanted a little more action and less talking. I also tended to get confused because Ilona would jump from subject to subject sometimes really fast.
The actual story and plot would have been very interesting with the magical abilities and the threat of death, as well as love blossoming, but it just seemed like it went so slow.
I also felt like Ilona scared the next minute on her healing abilities but then recalling how she can slow down time all her life. There were parts that were boring and I felt as confused and angry as Ilona. I wished we would have found out a little more about what was the big secret about the Hun tradition but I think the author just wanted to get to that in the second book.
The book just kinda stops and that is the end. I was hoping for a little more and you get that in the excerpt from Book 2, but I don't know if it would be enough for me to want to read the second one.
If you are looking for a book with interesting facts about different Hun beliefs then you would enjoy this novel, but if you are wanting a little bit more substance to it with the plot, I would probably pass on this. "
Beckieforg 5 stars
Good read
"Read this book on a recommendation from a friend and couldn't put it down. The characters were intriguing and mysterious and full of secrets. The story came together beautifully and I can't wait to read the next one."
Nandj 5 stars
Should be a movie
"I WAS THRILLED TO READ THIS BOOK, HAVE STARTED THE SECOND AND CAN'T WAIT TO GET THROUGH IT. IT IS SO HARD TO PUT THESE BOOKS DOWN. IT IS SIMPLY AND UNDERSTANDABLY WRITTEN, I FELT LIKE I WAS RIGHT THERE. THE DESCRIPTIONS GAVE ME CLEAR VISIONS OF THE SCENERY AND CHARACTERS. I LIKE ILONA AND ZOLTAN AS A COUPLE, THEY WERE TRULY MEANT FOR EACH OTHER BUT I FEEL A LITTLE ON EDGE WONDERING WHAT THEIR FINAL DESTINY IS. CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT. THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT RUA'S CHARACTER THAT DEPICTS HIM AS SHADY. OVERALL, THIS STORY IS A PERFECT COMBINATION OF FACT, FICTION, MYSTERY, ROMANCE, MAGIC AND FANTASY. NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVIE."
Susan C 5 stars
Magical mystery
"I enjoyed it thoroughly. The author tells a wonderful story. Hope to hear more from her. Very descriptive. You can picture everything she says. I would read it again."
Frank 5 stars
Plays like a movie
"My wife got this book when the author gave away a few free copies. She was talking about it for days after she read it and she made me curious. Loved this story! Loved the characters especially Ilona and loved the historical bits a lot. Huns are always depicted as barbarians and almost living in the story made me changed my mind about them after I looked up some facts mentioned in the story. There is humor, magical realism, love triangle and plenty of mysterious events to keep you reading. It is not just a chick book guys, you won't be sorry if you read it. "
Muse of Hell 5 stars
Marvelous fantasy from a different perspective
"This is a wonderful read with lots of interesting information from a group that I have never read about before. The book really moves and takes you some very interesting places. We have a new writer on our hands, folks! "
Ivis Bo Davis 5 star
Explosively Emotional
"Erika has done it again... filling my mind and heart with images and emotions so intense I had to back away for a moment just to catch my breath. She invites her readers into the secret depths of her character's hearts... a place beyond closed and locked doors where she bares their souls as they seek to navigate the dangerous waters of life. An amazing read created by the strong heart of a wonderful and courageous author. I consider this novel a treatise on personal courage. Keep 'em coming Erika! "
Bryan W Dull 4 stars
A Nonstop Mystery!
"What a great exciting read. There are tons of mystery and suspense that take you on a thrill ride to the end. The story keeps you guessing and asking what does all this mean? What are her "gifts" and what does the mystery all about. The other part that I found intriguing was the love triangle in this story, which is unlike any other I have read. You have her best friend who she has loved all her life and then you have the mysterious stranger who she drawn to at a soul searching level. This is a great read that levels you on a roller coaster ride with all the twist and turns! "
Little Kate 4 stars
"I received a signed copy of this book as one of the goodreads giveaways, so many thanks to Erika Szabo and Goodreads for this. I really enjoyed reading it, but it ended far too soon for me. The book is well written and easy to read and de-stress too, so I found it perfect to snuggle under a blanket and lose myself in the story.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self-discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the `heroine' is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don't know). I would definitely recommend this book as one to read; in fact I'm after the second part myself. "
Ginagina24 5 stars
Good read
"This is a great book. I enjoyed the characters, very likable and easy to relate with. The story line is engaging, I loved learning about the Huns and their beliefs. Such a new a different type of book, I hope there is a squeal. "
Mattin4unc 4 stars
"This is a story about Ilona who was born a True Hun. She lost both of her parents in a car accident at a young age. She always felt the need to heal people and grew up to become a doctor. At the age of 29 everything changed. She became aware of some mysterious healing powers that she had, but didn't know exactly what to do with them. Her mother died before she got a chance to explain the powers to her. While trying to figure out her new found powers, she encounters a mysterious evil looking man. Every time the man appears, Ilona finds her life in danger.
Ilona meets a handsome young doctor named Zoltan. It is love at first sight. He saves her life several times by using his time travel powers. Together they vow to find the hidden secrets of their powers as Huns.
I enjoyed this book and look forward to the sequel. "
Alayna 5 stars
Great fantasy story
"I loved this book - the story is about Ilona, a girl who is descended from the Huns. She is a doctor, but on her 29th birthday she finds herself with extra healing powers - plus she meets a man and must determine if he is her soul mate. The story id very engaging, and I liked all the detail about the Huns and their beliefs. I could hardly put the book down, and the ending left me wanting to know more! I thought it was a very good fantasy type novel, and would be interested in reading more of Ilona's story. "
Laxmi Hariharan 5 stars
Ilona-my kind gal!
"As an adopted Hungarian, I was intrigued by the title. While the book is in the fantasy genre, I learned interesting facts about Hun history from the story which gripped me right from the beginning. It started a little slow and some parts could have been a little more streamlined, yet as I persisted the story unfolded play out like a movie in my mind. Ilona's my kind of woman! I love her naivety & honesty and personally identified with her inner struggle in discovering and adapting to her powers. I liked the scenes set in the hospital where Ilona and Zoltan are both doctors, and the reference to Hungarian history added a special mystery to the story. I couldn't help but think that there was something not very savory about Zoltan (gosh! I love his name!). I ended up rooting for Bela, urging him to tell Ilona about his real feelings for her. Overall a real fascinating story. Can't wait to read the second book to find out more about the mysterious world of the Huns and to see if my premonition about Zoltan is correct. Laxmi Hariharan, Author of The Destiny of Shaitan "
Mn51979 5 stars
"Although different from what I normally read, I found myself emerged into the fantasy world of the Huns from the very beginning, and I loved it. The characters are easy to connect with; I felt for them from the beginning and wanted to know what was going to happen to them. Ilona is a strong heroine with abilities that she is just beginning to understand. I liked the complicated love/friendship she has with her best friend Bela and the new emerging relationship with Zoltan. It provides for a great love triangle that I'm looking for to reading more about in the next book. The mystery of the dark man pursuing Ilona and the secrets that her loved ones are keeping from her left me wanting more. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys mystery and fantasy as it contains both. "
Brandy Michelle rated it 5 of 5 stars
Recommends it for: everyone who loves a good mystery
A great story for anyone who loves mystery and romance! I loved the suspense and mystery surrounding her gifts and her family. It was really sad at times when she was dealing with things that were happening to her and she really didn't have anyone she could talk to. I also loved the inner turmoil she had trying figure out her feeling she was having about her best friend and the new handsome man who entered her life. There is also some action with a mystery man who keeps turning her life upside down and making bad situations appear at every turn.. I will stop there so I don't want to give anymore away! READ & ENJOY!
I loved the characters. Ilona and Bela friendship was so sweet and at times I felt bad for Ilona for her feelings were far deeper than Bela’s. Ilona keep them hide well though. Zoltan was perfect a True Hun like Ilona but are they destined to be mates? What is Elza hiding? Can Ema heal from the past? I recommend this book to all. A lot of the medical references were right on. Erika has just knocked it out of the park with this book.
The story line was fascinating and so unique. I found myself glued to the pages devouring every last word and when finished I was like I need book 2 ASAP. Erika writes with vivid description I loved how she started all the chapters with plants and their symbolism. I loved reading about the Hun tribe and culture. I am intrigued to learn more about Ilona and her abilities and I would love to know why all the secrecy behind them. If you are looking for a book full of mystery and suspense with a small paranormal twist well then look no more Erika Szabo has written the perfect series for that. She will leave you begging for book 2 Secrets Revealed in the Ilona The Hun Trilogy
Confession of the paranormal blog
Birthright!!!! Where do I begin to count the ways!!! Wow I found this book to be astounding!!! By far the most vividly interesting paranormal romance book I've ever read. It is about a "girl” named Ilona; who by “Hun” culture standard is not yet a woman until the age of 29. She does not quite understand her true destiny until then. Birthright Bestowed is well written in such unique manner, you cannot help be captivated to the end. I must say it’s nothing like I've read before. I could feel and visualize what was gaping as if I was right there. I love Ilona and Bela friendship. Mmmmm. So if you’re looking for a book that has bit of everything from love, fantasy, special powers etc. This is totally for you. In fact if I were you I would get my copy now!!!!! A definite must read!!
Amazon reviews
5 stars Engaging and enchanting story!, April 9, 2013
By Amanda Danser - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
The best kinds of stories are ones that play in your mind as you're reading along. With Birthright Bestowed, Erika has certainly accomplished a feast-for-the-senses story! Erika's descriptive writing is both simple and complete. Be it describing how a character looks, how a dream feels, or how yummy lunch looks, this story played inside my head beautifully. Experiencing Ilona's journey as she turns twenty-nine and begins to find out what her destiny and purpose in life is was a treat. Intelligent, caring, self-strong and clumsy, Ilona is a perfectly written central character. Each time she escapes into her "time capsule" to think you are treated to a very busy mind at work. The integration of the main characters' Hun heritage added both historical and mysterious treats. With the inclusion of time travel, unclear rites of passage, and a menacing stranger, Erika wrote a story that I couldn't consume quick enough. The dynamics between the characters are wonderfully written. Reading along, you feel the instant connection Ilona and Zoltan have for each other, the loving yet quirky bond between Ilona and Bela, and the strong familial ties that Ilona, Elza, Ema, and Rua have formed. There is plenty of mystery, secrets, history, love and even silly (chipmunk) moments to round out this story into a superbly written tale. Unfolding in a natural rhythm, Birthright Bestowed is an exciting and wondrous novel. Kudos to Erika for a well-rounded and creatively written story. I know I'm more than ready for Book 2! Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
5 stars Suspense, Mystery & Love, March 25, 2013
By Msdelgado - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Where do I begin? There is so much to tell. Excitement, mystery, suspense, danger and most of all love. Not just love between a man and a woman but love between family and friends as well.
Ilona has just turned 29 and has discovered a secret ability about herself. Scared and feeling alone, she doesn't know who to turn to for answers. The only people she can turn to, her parents, are no longer around. Her adopted family is strictly forbidden to tell. Feeling alone and scared she attempts to piece the secrets from her past and the secrets from her present together. As she takes us on this journey, she meets the man of her dreams and the dark man of her worst nightmares. I cheered her on as she slowly connects the dots leading up to her frantic decision to hide one of the most precious secrets of her life. I was left wanting more and quickly read the 2nd book in the series, Secrets Revealed. Waiting for my book 3 fix. Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
5 stars Mysteries of the True Hun, March 24, 2013
By Sarah - Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?)
This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
I absolutely love this story. It's full of mystery, suspense, danger and let's not forget the handsome stranger who falls in love (at 1st sight) with Ilona (the amazingly smart and very lovable heroine). I loved the Hungarian touch written into the beginning of each chapter followed with the English translation. Though, I would love to actually hear the Hungarian version. I think it would sound so amazingly intriguing.
This story took me on a wonderful journey through the past, present and future. When Ilona turns 29, becoming an adult by Hun standards she finds she has an extraordinary gift. She is left frustrated & determined as she tries to figure out what this gift really is and what she can do with it. I found myself feeling her frustrations and rooting for her when she finally puts the puzzle pieces together.
We are left hanging at the end of the story not knowing the full outcome of one of the hardest decisions she has had to make. Queue up book 2, Secrets Revealed. Starting it next.
5 stars Coming of Age as a healer, March 22, 2013
By A. E. Drury "Ed Drury" (Portland, OR, United States) - (REAL NAME) Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?) This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
This wonderful book really piqued my interest in Hun culture and language. Told in a fascinating way through journal entries by the characters we learn of a centuries old traditions which are closed to outsiders and filled with magical lore. One of the aspects of this book I really enjoyed was Ilona's entries which reference the medicinal and religious aspects of various plants and flowers. Each chapter, as I remember it, contains these intriguing short glimpses into traditional medicine and beliefs.
It is, at its core, a romance novel. But it is also a thriller with dark undercurrents of mysterious and dangerous forces at work. As a first book in a series, it sets the stage for an epic saga about complex characters, relationships, and secret traditions. I enjoyed this one greatly and am anxious to read more about Ilona, her gifts, and her family.
4 stars Like NO other supernatural story! MUCH BETTER, March 18, 2013
By Carrie Fort "Indy Book Fairy" (Arizona) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
What a great read!
The story was fabulous, I sat down and was easily wrapped into the story. I was so impressed by the Hun Tribe and Ilona!
It wasn't too fast or too slow it was... Just..... Perfect!
It was inline any other story I have ever read.
I look forward to reading more from this series and this author!!
I was given book by author for an honest review LoP
5 stars Simply Amazing!!!!!!, March 18, 2013
By Lesikar - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
What can I say, I loved this book and the story, it was amazing. I stepped into the world of Ilona and she took me on a journey. Ilona is a great woman who is coming of age at 29 ( nice to see older females in a book). Ilona has a good career and friends, but she lacks in self-confidence when it comes to herself. You will meet some considerable people in this world, and it was very refreshing and exciting. This book is like sitting down to watch your favorite TV show...and you just can't wait to see what happens next. Now I must go and see if book 2 is available I can't wait. We all need a little Fantasy at times, and this is the book for that.
5 stars A different kind of romance, March 1, 2013
By Joseph - Amazon Verified Purchase
This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Ilona is a unique heroine, and is part of the line of Huns that still exists in the present day, though they keep their rituals a secret. I found Ilona to be tough, smart, and entertaining. Szabo manages to create the complete woman. This isn't your grandmother's romance. Due to the death of her parents, Ilona doesn't receive the typical instruction as to the purpose and use of her powers--mainly the ability to heal--and she is left to piece together her abilities and her tribes past using nursery rhymes taught to her by her mother. Very clever and well written tale.
5 stars Legends for Today, February 9, 2013
By Michel A. Du Mont - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Paperback)
The great story line takes Hun legends heard years ago and brings them to life in today's world. Birthright Bestowed is a creative blend of love, fantasy, history and simple 'life happens'. Erika incorporated the meanings of flowers in a manner that adds unexpected richness. Her characters resemble people one actually knows. The events could happen to anyone. Her treatment draws the reader to look for more.
The author gifted me this book, Birthright Bestowed and I am glad she did. It is well worth reading.
5 stars Loved it!, February 9, 2013
By Hayls - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Oh how I totally loved reading this book and cannot wait to read the next ones.
I found it so easy to read and easy to follow, hence making it easy to finish rather quickly in one of those middle of the night 'must finish' sessions.
I was captivated by the main character Ilona, and the way the book was written had me right there with her throughout her journey in this first novel.
To me there was all the right amounts of suspence, surprise, romance and interesting facts that I can't wait to find more about.
I would recommend this to anyone to read, but be prepared to 'want more'
4 stars Unlike Anything I Have Read Before...., February 7, 2013
By Gladys Quintal (Australia) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Oh so cruel to end it there!!!!!! I totally loved this story, it was unlike anything I have ever read before and I am totally hooked. I need to find out more about the True Hun's and their abilities. Who will Ilona choose and what is Elza hiding??
I guess I am just going to have to start with book 2....
Erika, you have a new fan:)
5 stars Wonderful read for History buffs, February 6, 2013
By Virginia - Amazon Verified Purchase This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
I purchased the Kindle edition yesterday - read cover to cover like an addict - couldn't get enough of Ilona, Bea, Elza and the rest of Erika's cast of amazing characters. Being a retired history teacher, I found the author's voice pulling right along beside her as Ilona discovers not only her own past but her own heritage.A young female doctor with an amazing ability to shift time and heal... what a delightful thought. Not wanting to spoil anyone else's journey let’s just say you can't go wrong venturing into the mind of a HUN in our modern day society.
3 stars A new voice in urban fantasy, January 28, 2013
By Philologus - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
The true Huns make a grand entry into the world of urban fantasy with this book. The revelation of the main character's birthright is well done and one very, very special feature are the musical pictures. Lovely. The execution of the story calls in my opinion - as with many new & indie authors - for a good editor. There are repetitions, inconsistencies and typos/grammatical errors which seriously detract from the unpolished beauty.
5 stars Magical, Intriguing and Unique!, December 22, 2012
By MG WELLS - BIRTHRIGHT BESTOWED by Erika M. Szabo is so original, there is nothing I can compare it to, and I'm happy about it. Discovering an unusual, original story is always a thrill.
Ancient, Magical Healing Rituals and family traditions bind this story.
Personally, I had no prior knowledge of THE HUNS, yet resonated with them as spiritually evolved earthly beings, who pass down healing knowledge and magical traditions that benefit humankind.
The plot and story is extensive and intricate. Ultimately, I resonated with the tale, the characters and their destiny to heal the ills and sorrows of humanity. I was enthralled with the complexity and attention to detail.
BIRTHRIGHT is a realistic, dramatic, intense, mystical tale which emphasizes spiritual/physical healing as well as forging humanity to evolve to a higher level at all costs. I look forward to the next book in the series.
5 stars A True Hun? A True Honey of a story!, December 21, 2012
By Cynthia J. Smith - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Paperback)
To begin, I love the way Erika starts each of her chapters! Using the meaning of plants as the theme of the section is enlightening and novel.
This is the first book in a series about Huns. It is written as a memoir but by various people involved in the action. It is written partly in "Hun dialect" which makes it that much richer!
Ilona is the main character. She has "come of age (29)" according to Hun tradition and is suddenly made aware of special "gifts" she has.
I love the idea that family members are actually physically kept from telling secrets. I am sure we all heard, "I'll explain when you get older". Unfortunately for Ilona, her parents died before they got the chance to explain.
The story flows smoothly with the introduction of many new "gifts" and a twist of fate. Everything is done with attention to detail, even historical notes!
My favorite part was the description of Ema's paintings! What a wonderful idea!
Well done! Bring on the rest!
5 stars A grand beginning for an epic heroine, October 18, 2012
By polemarch "lokhos" (USA) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
Ilona the Hun is a woman's woman and a man's woman to boot. The author has created an unforgettable character who sees the world in a singular way. Written with style and and grace, Erika Szabo has stepped into the novel wars with a powerful entry. Read it and enjoy Ilona's sensuality as she adventures where lesser women fear to tread.
5 stars Not your everyday romance, October 18, 2012
By Valerie Byron (Los Angeles, California) - This review is from: Birthright Bestowed (Ilona the Hun novels) (Kindle Edition)
You may have heard of Atilla the Hun, but Ilona the Hun is an entirely different breed. Unlike most modern romances, this one is quite unique and definitely imaginative. The author writes with English as a second language, which is charming and stylized. Her heroine, Ilona,is a woman with hidden secrets and magical powers which are vividly described.
I found this book to be chock full of interesting historical and medical information - and if you love time travel,you'll be well satisfied.
It's a great read and a bargain at the price. Cannot wait for the next in the series.
Goodreads reviews
Connie Kline rated it 5 of 5 stars
I recently read this book not knowing what to expect. Can I say WOW!!! This was an easy read, very well written, and kept me glued to the characters. I can't wait to read book two and follow these amazing characters. Highly recommended!!
MissyDevoursDelishReads rated it 5 of 5 stars
Shelves: amazeballsbookcovers, favorites, flutterworthy, paranormal, youngadult
Amazeballs writing...but stuck in another ending book saga! Ahhhhhh keep sucking me in. LOL Awesome storyline~ I'm anticipating more in depth reading in continuation. 5 Star Rating ~Great Editing & Love love love book cover too!
Missdevora rated it 4 of 5 stars Recommends it for: Mystery, paranormal, romance readers.
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review from the Goodreads group Lovers of Paranormal, R2R Program.
I like how the author starts each of her chapters, using the meaning of plants and flowers and a definition as the theme of the section, it is very unique.
The cover is also very beautiful and describes Ilona's features perfectly, especially her eyes.
Some parts of the book are written in the Hun language, which gives a special touch to the legends and rhymes.
The concept of the Huns, in this book, has nothing to do with the battles of Attila or history, although he and other well-known people are mentioned in the right moment, surrounded by folklore.
The Huns have special abilities or gifts: foreseeing the future, time traveling, healing with a touch, creating dreams or create art that suggests music. The Huns are also full of mystery and they reach more knowledge when they reach certain ages, and cannot be told from others until the time is right.
Illona is a 29 year old doctor, who can heal her patients with the modern medicine and her secret gift, but is better to be kept away from the kitchen or electronic devices. She also is in love with her best friend and starting to fall in love with the mysterious hun that just moved in town.
While she tries to solve the mysteries about being a True Hun and reevaluates herself as a woman, who is quite insecure, she is being attacked several times.
The universe created in this book is original, mystical and unique; in fact it's so original I have nothing to compare it with.
I look forward to the second book as this one left me with a huge cliffhanger and hunger to know more about the fabulous world that Erika created!
Becky rated it 3.5 of 5 stars
I received this book as an ebook from the goodreads group lovers of paranormal in exchange for my honest review.
The premise of the story is very engaging. Ilona is a true hun, but doesnt know much about what that means, other than a lot of rules and rituals to be followed. She should learn on her 29th birthday,but her parents are not there to tell her of her birthright, because they died in a car crash when she was young. So she must figure it out on her own.
Along the way, she meets Zoltan, the sexy new hun in town, and is immediately drawn to him.
Oh, and random people keep trying to kill her for no apparent reason.
I grew to like the flower language used in the beginnings of chapters. I didnt like switching points of view; it seemed to me that, in this case, it gave away some plot that hadnt happened yet.
What really bothered me about the book was that it didnt seem to have been edited. And not just normal ebook errors. There were homonym errors and structural sentence errors! Somebody needs to have a talk with that editor.
But, overall, mostly very enjoyable. Fresh idea. I will be reading the sequel
Mar 18, 2013 Lesikar rated it 5 of 5 stars
Shelves: march-2013, fantasy
What can I say, I loved this book and the story, it was amazing. I stepped into the world of Ilona and she took me on a journey. Ilona is a great woman who is coming of age at 29 ( nice to see older females in a book). Ilona has a good career and friends, but she lacks in self-confidence when it comes to herself. You will meet some considerable people in this world, and it was very refreshing and exciting. This book is like sitting down to watch your favorite TV show...and you just can't wait to see what happens next. Now I must go and see if book 2 is available I can't wait. We all need a little Fantasy at times, and this is the book for that.
Shelves: firstreads
I received this book as a firstread so I would like to say a big thank you to the author.
I really love the concept of this book. It’s a different than any other super natural books I’ve read, which is a wonderful change. Sometimes you don’t realize how similar they start sounding until you read something completely different.
Though I gave this book 5 stars I almost gave it 4 stars for two reasons:
First - I found that some points in the story were repeated too many times. For example – I don’t need to be told repeatedly that when Rua was younger he was hurt by falling off a horse.
Second – While I don’t mind stories were I can figure out what is going to happen, or the answer to the “mystery” the main character is trying to figure it out before they do, I do not like being spoon feed the answers only to have the character take another chapter or two to figure it out. It makes things a little drawn out and I find it slightly frustrating.
Those two things said I really loved this book. I’m not a huge romance fan but this was so much fun to read. It does read a bit like a YA book but I kind of like that, there is something to be said for sweet and innocent romance. I also love the references to the flowers in the beginning of each chapter and the stories of Hun folklore.
This book was an all-around fun, creative, and enjoyable read!
Note - This book is a bit of a cliff hanger so be prepared that you will want to read the second book. Normally I don't like books dropping off like this but for some reason with this book I didn't mind.
Margaret (Literary Chanteuse 4 stars
In the commencement of this book you are thrown into the unique world of this character and what an intricate mind boggling world it is. Once again Ilona is caught between trying to become the person she is meant to be without the much needed guidance of her parents and understanding and embracing who she truly is. There is an amazing amount of discoveries in store for Ilona in this segment as well as finding true love. The author once again mixes a blend of magic, history and folklore with a bit of time travel thrown in for good measure. I would highly recommend for those readers who have not read the first in this series to do so prior to reading this one as it gives a complete back round to not only many of the characters but the importance of the tribal and mystical concepts that are vital throughout the story.
Margaret 4 stars
Very well written in a memoir style that brings a little ancient history and folklore to a unique story. While reading I was conjuring up images in my mind and the main character has a real quality about her that has me wondering if she is real or not. There's even some unexpected thrilling moments. I look forward to what I will discover about her in the next book.
Kate Watts 4 stars
I received a signed copy of this book as one of the goodreads giveaways, so many thanks to Erika Szabo and Goodreads for this. I really enjoyed reading it, but it ended far too soon for me. The book is well written and easy to read and de-stress too, so I found it perfect to snuggle under a blanket and lose myself in the story.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self-discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the ‘heroine’ is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don’t know).
Danielle Kazemi 5 stars
Erika Szabo has managed to create a captivating story which centers around Ilona, descendant of the True Hun tribe. She had been kept in the dark about her birthright and the possibilities of being a Hun. She comes to unimaginable powers, healing with a touch is but one of them. Ilona's journey of discovering and learning to use her gifts while her life is in danger is exciting, also dealing with the emotions and problems of being a single woman who is torn between two men. One, Bela, has been her friend and love since they were kids while the other one, Zoltan, appears to have been pulled straight from her dreams. This book also shows how matchmaking can prove to be troublesome. Now she has to deal with her feelings for them as well as learning to use her new powers while fighting unseen evil force to save the future of the Huns. I highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a little magic with their romance
Tony Passarelli 5 stars
Birthright Ilona the Hun Book One is a fantasy romance that reads like a good mystery novel. Steeped in Hungarian legend and natural healing, Ilona is a character with a secret heritage and on the cusp of understanding her true potential. A new attractive Hun comes into Ilona's life, but he is not alone, there is also the strange dark man who seems intent upon delivering evil. With time manipulation, dream weaving and extraordinary healing powers, this is an urban fantasy story that will keep the reader turning the pages. Erika M. Szabo's debut novel is fresh, original and engrossing.
Editorial review
I want to give you my overall impression of your work: You have a terrific writing style. You have obviously done a significant amount planning and preparation in crafting your work. Your prose is nicely written with details that capture the reader. Right from the start your plot was very engaging. You do a nice job of slowly making your way through the story with details and a certain voice that allows your reader to really interact with the characters (who are all round and very nicely developed). The greatest value in fiction, it seems to me, lies in what we can learn about our own lives when we take time to analyze someone else’s — even if that someone else is just a character in a story. Characterization is one of the most important elements of any successful story. I always love it when I leave a story feeling like I know the characters. This is true for your prose. So many authors rush through their stories without really developing them. Not you. Your book read like a movie in my mind. You have crafted a quality piece of writing.
Reviewed by Olivera Baumgartner-Jackson for Reader Views (12/11)
Ilona is about to turn 29, an age which holds a great deal of meaning in the Hun society. There have been many hints about her destiny being revealed at that age, and her true calling coming to a full potential, but in the absence of her mother, who has passed away a while ago, Ilona lacks somebody to guide her. Sure, there is Elza, the devoted housekeeper, who sometimes reveals a small snippet of the True Hun stories, but Ilona does not understand too well what she is about to encounter. Who exactly are the True Huns? What is the meaning of rather puzzling behavior strangers have exhibited towards Ilona since an early age? Why has her mark changed color? Having more of her healing powers bestowed upon her, Ilona is struggling to understand what exactly they are and how they work. To make her life even more complicated, she is suddenly torn between two gorgeous men. Bela has been her constant companion and best friend since childhood and Ilona has always wanted them to be more than just friends. Then there is Zoltan, who has entered her life recently, and to whom she feels immensely drawn, yet she is also somewhat terrified of what she glimpsed in him. Is either of those two her true love? Can she find the happiness she so desperately seeks? Erika M. Szabo’s story introduced me to a whole new world of True Huns, fascinating beings who originated from what we nowadays call Hungary. The stories of my early days, those about Turul bird and Magyars and Huns, as well as some of the customs my grandparents insisted on, most notably always serving refreshments to anybody visiting, brought back many happy childhood memories. But Ms. Szabo took them much further and spun out a magical story of a special race, the Huns, gifted with many extraordinary abilities, yet living among the other, ordinary humans. I’ve greatly enjoyed the glimpses into the past, as well as many of the fantasy elements of the story, and I was truly curious about the love triangle between Ilona and the two hunks courting her. For all of those aforementioned reasons I would love to see the continuation of this mesmerizing story.
By Ivis H Davis 4 stars
“I'm a guy. Which, I suppose, by definition makes me an emotional moron, but I find the main character so in touch with her feelings that it almost scares me. It's like I can feel the intensity of the emotion to the point that it hurts. Maybe that's what it means to be a Hun?”
Julia Walker 4 stars
“Eternal love triangle, ancient tribal secrets and special healing powers, a great combination!
Ilona has always known she is a True Hun, and Elza her housekeeper ensures that traditional rituals such as Morning Prayer are followed religiously; As Ilona's twenty-ninth birthday approaches, suppressed racial memories stir in her mind and although she already has the power to read others' thoughts, new miraculous powers are beginning to grow within her. At this book's heart is a love story, and a most unusual heroine. Ilona has the power to heal with her hands alone, she also holds the fate of her people, the True Huns in her hands. Just as she must decide between the two men, she must decide whether to use her powers for good or evil, and the choice isn't so simple as it appears. I'm fascinated by ancient history, civilizations and the idea societies have secret spiritual rituals at their heart - the author weaves the Hun culture through her story in an enjoyable and informative way, whilst introducing a very modern heroine, the beautiful Ilona.”
JFaye 4 stars
This novel has mystery, suspense, romance and well developed characters that hold reading interests from its beginning to end. The element of the "Huns", a mysterious ancient people with a real historical significance (e.g. Atilla the Hun)and the fact that Ilona the Hun is central to the story, adds even more intrigue. The significance of flowers in the use of language and meaningful purpose was inspiring as well. In short, it is an intriguing work of fiction with all of the right elements to keep it interesting.
Cat RNOBS 4 stars
It was very easy to get absorbed in the characters. One can picture the development of the relationships in these stories. This engages the reader and encourages you to easily continue in the reading of the story. I can picture the story being made into cinema. The art work on the covers are beautiful, an incredible gift, created by her daughter. You will want to pick up the next book. The saga continues. Welcome to the world of the Huns. Enjoy the journey.
Valerie Byron 5 stars
Completely new and different
"I was dreaming. In the dream I was about four or five with pigtails, wearing a ruffled white dress. We were in a grocery store; I was happily hopping and singing, holding onto my mother's hand, delighted to be with her as always. She smiled at me. Her hand was warm and silky, and her lustrous dark reddish hair flowed to her mid-back. She had the deepest blue eyes, framed by long lashes. Her eyes promised love and security. I admired her and wanted to be with her all the time. To my childish disappointment, she was busy for the biggest part of every day. When she could spend the whole day with me, I enjoyed every moment of our time together. I was chattering away, happy she was paying attention to me, only to me. I was telling her a silly story I'd made up, when I saw an old woman fall in the middle of the aisle. I tore my hand from my mother's grasp and ran over to the woman. She was wincing in pain, lying on the floor. I felt my mother behind me. "Momma, she is broken. I want to fix her!" I looked up, hoping for her approval. "All right, sweet pea, you know what to do. Gather the wish in your core and concentrate on it. There you go. You're doing fine. Now, put your hands on her. Don't be afraid, go ahead!" I heard my mother's velvety voice, and I felt her hand on my shoulder. As I touched the woman's hip, I felt warmth emanating from my fingers. A serene, satisfied feeling washed over me." And so starts Ilona's story. If you have read all the prior reviews, you will know something about the plot for this unusual book. If you have only read about "Huns" in your history books, this will give you some insight into their history and people. Ilona is a magnificent woman - a doctor - who has powers of healing that are beyond comprehension. As she learns to deal with her new and somewhat frightening abilities, she also has to juggle two love affairs. This is so different from the usual fare churned out by "ordinary" writers that I highly recommend everyone to take a look at something new and completely different. Ilona, her family and friends are bewitching.....the time travel aspects are breathtaking....and you will learn something useful along the way. An excellent read!
Amy @ read to my heart content 3 stars
"The story of Ilona the Hun: Birthright was so so for me. It wasn't terrible but it just didn't hold my fascination like some plots can. As far as historical facts and information regarding the Hun history and beliefs, this was an exceptional book to read. Just for that purpose, however, wasn't enough for me.
It is about a woman named Ilona who turns 29; according to Hun tradition this is one of the three stages of being a true adult. With the coming of this birthday, Ilona begans receiving different powers and abilities that she has no idea how to use. She also meets someone who she believes may be her "soulmate" because she dreamed of him. And to top things off, she has this strange evil man trying to kill her in unusual ways. The chapters are arranged beautifully with the Hun writing at the beginning, as well as the different flowers and their meanings. This was of interest to me and I found it enlightening to understand the different meanings for different flowers.
I couldn't really get into the way it was written. It was in journal form but there was just too much inner dialogue from Ilona for me. I guess I wanted a little more action and less talking. I also tended to get confused because Ilona would jump from subject to subject sometimes really fast.
The actual story and plot would have been very interesting with the magical abilities and the threat of death, as well as love blossoming, but it just seemed like it went so slow.
I also felt like Ilona scared the next minute on her healing abilities but then recalling how she can slow down time all her life. There were parts that were boring and I felt as confused and angry as Ilona. I wished we would have found out a little more about what was the big secret about the Hun tradition but I think the author just wanted to get to that in the second book.
The book just kinda stops and that is the end. I was hoping for a little more and you get that in the excerpt from Book 2, but I don't know if it would be enough for me to want to read the second one.
If you are looking for a book with interesting facts about different Hun beliefs then you would enjoy this novel, but if you are wanting a little bit more substance to it with the plot, I would probably pass on this. "
Beckieforg 5 stars
Good read
"Read this book on a recommendation from a friend and couldn't put it down. The characters were intriguing and mysterious and full of secrets. The story came together beautifully and I can't wait to read the next one."
Nandj 5 stars
Should be a movie
"I WAS THRILLED TO READ THIS BOOK, HAVE STARTED THE SECOND AND CAN'T WAIT TO GET THROUGH IT. IT IS SO HARD TO PUT THESE BOOKS DOWN. IT IS SIMPLY AND UNDERSTANDABLY WRITTEN, I FELT LIKE I WAS RIGHT THERE. THE DESCRIPTIONS GAVE ME CLEAR VISIONS OF THE SCENERY AND CHARACTERS. I LIKE ILONA AND ZOLTAN AS A COUPLE, THEY WERE TRULY MEANT FOR EACH OTHER BUT I FEEL A LITTLE ON EDGE WONDERING WHAT THEIR FINAL DESTINY IS. CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT. THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT RUA'S CHARACTER THAT DEPICTS HIM AS SHADY. OVERALL, THIS STORY IS A PERFECT COMBINATION OF FACT, FICTION, MYSTERY, ROMANCE, MAGIC AND FANTASY. NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVIE."
Susan C 5 stars
Magical mystery
"I enjoyed it thoroughly. The author tells a wonderful story. Hope to hear more from her. Very descriptive. You can picture everything she says. I would read it again."
Frank 5 stars
Plays like a movie
"My wife got this book when the author gave away a few free copies. She was talking about it for days after she read it and she made me curious. Loved this story! Loved the characters especially Ilona and loved the historical bits a lot. Huns are always depicted as barbarians and almost living in the story made me changed my mind about them after I looked up some facts mentioned in the story. There is humor, magical realism, love triangle and plenty of mysterious events to keep you reading. It is not just a chick book guys, you won't be sorry if you read it. "
Muse of Hell 5 stars
Marvelous fantasy from a different perspective
"This is a wonderful read with lots of interesting information from a group that I have never read about before. The book really moves and takes you some very interesting places. We have a new writer on our hands, folks! "
Ivis Bo Davis 5 star
Explosively Emotional
"Erika has done it again... filling my mind and heart with images and emotions so intense I had to back away for a moment just to catch my breath. She invites her readers into the secret depths of her character's hearts... a place beyond closed and locked doors where she bares their souls as they seek to navigate the dangerous waters of life. An amazing read created by the strong heart of a wonderful and courageous author. I consider this novel a treatise on personal courage. Keep 'em coming Erika! "
Bryan W Dull 4 stars
A Nonstop Mystery!
"What a great exciting read. There are tons of mystery and suspense that take you on a thrill ride to the end. The story keeps you guessing and asking what does all this mean? What are her "gifts" and what does the mystery all about. The other part that I found intriguing was the love triangle in this story, which is unlike any other I have read. You have her best friend who she has loved all her life and then you have the mysterious stranger who she drawn to at a soul searching level. This is a great read that levels you on a roller coaster ride with all the twist and turns! "
Little Kate 4 stars
"I received a signed copy of this book as one of the goodreads giveaways, so many thanks to Erika Szabo and Goodreads for this. I really enjoyed reading it, but it ended far too soon for me. The book is well written and easy to read and de-stress too, so I found it perfect to snuggle under a blanket and lose myself in the story.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self-discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the `heroine' is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don't know). I would definitely recommend this book as one to read; in fact I'm after the second part myself. "
Ginagina24 5 stars
Good read
"This is a great book. I enjoyed the characters, very likable and easy to relate with. The story line is engaging, I loved learning about the Huns and their beliefs. Such a new a different type of book, I hope there is a squeal. "
Mattin4unc 4 stars
"This is a story about Ilona who was born a True Hun. She lost both of her parents in a car accident at a young age. She always felt the need to heal people and grew up to become a doctor. At the age of 29 everything changed. She became aware of some mysterious healing powers that she had, but didn't know exactly what to do with them. Her mother died before she got a chance to explain the powers to her. While trying to figure out her new found powers, she encounters a mysterious evil looking man. Every time the man appears, Ilona finds her life in danger.
Ilona meets a handsome young doctor named Zoltan. It is love at first sight. He saves her life several times by using his time travel powers. Together they vow to find the hidden secrets of their powers as Huns.
I enjoyed this book and look forward to the sequel. "
Alayna 5 stars
Great fantasy story
"I loved this book - the story is about Ilona, a girl who is descended from the Huns. She is a doctor, but on her 29th birthday she finds herself with extra healing powers - plus she meets a man and must determine if he is her soul mate. The story id very engaging, and I liked all the detail about the Huns and their beliefs. I could hardly put the book down, and the ending left me wanting to know more! I thought it was a very good fantasy type novel, and would be interested in reading more of Ilona's story. "
Laxmi Hariharan 5 stars
Ilona-my kind gal!
"As an adopted Hungarian, I was intrigued by the title. While the book is in the fantasy genre, I learned interesting facts about Hun history from the story which gripped me right from the beginning. It started a little slow and some parts could have been a little more streamlined, yet as I persisted the story unfolded play out like a movie in my mind. Ilona's my kind of woman! I love her naivety & honesty and personally identified with her inner struggle in discovering and adapting to her powers. I liked the scenes set in the hospital where Ilona and Zoltan are both doctors, and the reference to Hungarian history added a special mystery to the story. I couldn't help but think that there was something not very savory about Zoltan (gosh! I love his name!). I ended up rooting for Bela, urging him to tell Ilona about his real feelings for her. Overall a real fascinating story. Can't wait to read the second book to find out more about the mysterious world of the Huns and to see if my premonition about Zoltan is correct. Laxmi Hariharan, Author of The Destiny of Shaitan "
Mn51979 5 stars
"Although different from what I normally read, I found myself emerged into the fantasy world of the Huns from the very beginning, and I loved it. The characters are easy to connect with; I felt for them from the beginning and wanted to know what was going to happen to them. Ilona is a strong heroine with abilities that she is just beginning to understand. I liked the complicated love/friendship she has with her best friend Bela and the new emerging relationship with Zoltan. It provides for a great love triangle that I'm looking for to reading more about in the next book. The mystery of the dark man pursuing Ilona and the secrets that her loved ones are keeping from her left me wanting more. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys mystery and fantasy as it contains both. "
Brandy Michelle rated it 5 of 5 stars
Recommends it for: everyone who loves a good mystery
A great story for anyone who loves mystery and romance! I loved the suspense and mystery surrounding her gifts and her family. It was really sad at times when she was dealing with things that were happening to her and she really didn't have anyone she could talk to. I also loved the inner turmoil she had trying figure out her feeling she was having about her best friend and the new handsome man who entered her life. There is also some action with a mystery man who keeps turning her life upside down and making bad situations appear at every turn.. I will stop there so I don't want to give anymore away! READ & ENJOY!